Children's work experience
Children’s work experience
I agree with the statement that the children can benefit from their work experience in different areas. I will support my point of view with some reasons and examples.
In my opinion, youngsters will benefit from work by gaining more responsibility and independence. From my experience, giving a child some tasks that needs to be finished before a deadline will improve the child's responsibility. I also believe that the teenagers’ communication skills will improve by spending some time with adult employees. In which, whey will listen to new words and understand the ethics of communication. For example, the child will be more careful to use "could you please" or some other greeting phrases. The youth could also be more confident in speaking, by not hesitating or shying to what ever they want to say. Then, if they were paid off. I believe that they will understand the value of the money they got. Therefore, they will think twice before spending their money on something, which they will benefit on how to save their money and when to spend it in the right time. Lastly, I think going to work on time and doing some tasks on time will improve the children’s time management.
To sum up, there are many reasons to believe that the work experience is very useful for youngsters. However, not every work is suitable for them. I think nothing will be wrong as long as the work is easy to understand and has fewer responsibilities on them.
Good night,
Ahmed Mutawa
1 Comments:
Ahmed is 'on fire'! He has the time, determination and confidence to post on the weblog.
I already see some improvement, the writing is tight and focused. I have a few points to make:
- the introduction could be extended
- there should be two body paragraphs in the middle
- the conclusion could be sharper
Nevertheless, a solid essay and a useful example for the rest of the blog to follow.
Hello? Anybody else out there?
Thanks for taking the trouble to post this task 2 essay, Ahmed.
Tony
ps specific language analysis to follow from Jean Luc (?) or me (?)
By Tony Beale, at 9:25 AM
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