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Wednesday, September 27, 2006

Traditional skills - Mutawa

I have limited my time for this essay. Unfortunately, the topic was difficult to write. You will find out how I throw some random ideas that do not fit with the topic, because I was pushed by the time to finish it. The paragraphs are also too short.

10, 20 and 10 minutes on planning, writing and checking respectively.

Traditional skills

It is so important to have a county with rich traditional skills and devices alive. Therefore, I strongly disagree with the statement saying that there is no use of keeping traditional life alive. I have many reasons that could support my opinion.

I think that keeping the classic way of living alive will help a country's culture last. For example, the people will have their own way of greeting and festivals. I also believe that it is very important to keep a country's history; in order to know who they really are and were they originally from. Another reason to keep the history of a country is to learn from their previous knowledge. I think that people who do not know the traditional life of their grandfathers are just like machines that living the present only.

As far as I am concerned, each tradition has it is own taste of art, such as drawing, dancing and music.

In conclusion, I believe man kind cannot ignore their grand fathers' life history.

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